Wednesday, November 17, 2010

"Sousa Got it Wrong" by Bob Atkinson

"Sousa Got it Wrong"
(c) 2010 Bob Atkinson
Within the ranks
down the file
we marched as soldiers
all the while

thinking of those tunes we've heard
that makes a man proud of who he is

but Sousa missed the point of this
with brass it can't move to the heart
the drums, the fife the bag pipes
were good for those who give their lives

natives gave us drums to hear

the beat goes beyond our ears

to our hearts the tom toms sing

making our muscles hard 

and ears alert



the flute or fife helps

our martial feelings awake

marching well with pride on top

of our minds as our boots go plop


Sousa does a pretty tune  not related to the soldiers' moon
those ugly sounding things
the brass so crass 
it makes one cringe

give me drums to move my soul
not those dreary sounds so dull
give me things to move my heart
so I can willingly give my life

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